A new Story that is in my mind

Despite how busy i am now , i took a little time and wrote a story. Well , im kinda old and not used to be like last time , my fantasies kinda died alongside with age . Well , my grammar deteriorate as well which is quite sad.. haiz.. well , i think it is time to re-learn my stuffs, =D


Ahem.. Sandy urged me to write some kind of story .. Well .. here you go.. a sneak peak of the story.. The beginning of the story .. Hmm.. haven decided what to call this story.. Well , lets just assume this story's name is : The forgotten Prince , Zerxes


Chapter 1 : How it Begins


Long time ago in a far away land, where the sun is bright and the people are always in sight, magicians roam about with their magical acts while knights in shining plate armors held their mighty swords are too in sight . The land has a name which most people don’t know, a name that was long forgotten through the existence of time, the land’s name was Helixus kingdom.

This kingdom was ruled by a very powerful king, King Zell the second. Well often we hear stories about powerful Kings were always evil and greedy as they often steal their people’s money for their own benefits but King Zell is different. He is a very generous king with a kind heart, he treated his people well and all his people loved him very much. He has a very wonderful family which consisted of a very beautiful wife , Queen Julia and a very pretty daughter , Princess Rin .

Princess Rin is a very pretty princess who is often cherished by the town’s people. Princess Rin is so beautiful that even at age of five; King Zell has problems dealing with marriage proposals. How pretty Princess Rin you say? Well, she has a pair of big round eyes which are blue in color like the bluish (Blue-ish) vast sky on top of us. She has a straight and short hair colored in gold that if you look it closely it looks like real gold, with a skin that is so white that it looks like snow; she looks like an angel that came from heaven to greet us hello.

Rin was quite playful as she was just five; she kept running up and down always troubling the castle’s maids.





To be Continued ....





Well folks , this is the only bit that i can think of now.. sadly i don't have much time to write anymore... need to do my work.. Give your comments down below.. =) .. Ideas will be considered =p